I am sure that my token has permission because I can use it to run script

What auth method does your script use?

yes, but as I said , I am using jira server, not cloud but I am not sure how can I modify, I guess default supporting of meltao, it support cloud version

I would assume you have to modify this to work with Jira Server, since

domain

alone may not be enough to connect to your instance: https://github.com/MeltanoLabs/tap-jira/blob/10ff085d38d049814ce9880115e917e45632750e/tap_jira/client.py#L34